Free writing

For this week I wrote about The Visitor from pobble365 it a great website to do or your writing I hope you enjoy.

Once upon time there was a person called Jack there was visiting the deadly building that fall apart and there broken piece were destroying the place,However one the piece had a number called 0949717894 Jack resized that had something to do some about this so he quickly memorised the number and he went home to and called the number before he went back so he went home and called 0949717894 and when he called the place a women was screaming over the place he noticed something was wrong for him,So he quickly went back to the flying building he jumped on the building he was scared about it because it might kill him he went on to the building and it was flying to somewhere it went to a devil place where it had flame and dead people he notice there was a boss his name was Hirini was most evil person in the world he had power like flamethrowers and one hit one kill Jack was scared but there was a lever to kill the boss if you kill him you bring him back from the past there is a consequence you will lose a your job have a terrible life but it was worth all the people back to life and kill him so he did it and gravity was changing the building was dead and  now he a famous that save everyone else life it in news paper,TV,online,poster and fan favourite THE END.