This is the Holiday blogging hope you like the DLO this about the where will i go if a could any where i picked Canada because it was i relaxing country it busy and i chilled environment you get to live in a big house friends and play with them in a beach thats why i picked Canada
Wow Thomas Canada does sound like a great place to go for a holiday. Remember when you are writing that I is a capital when you are writing about yourself. I can't wait to see your other work.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great destination Thomas - Canada have some outstanding tourist attractions - have a look online - if you could visit one of tourist attractions - which one wold it be?
ReplyDeleteYour work is awesome. Maybe you could change your colour on the last slide because it is hard to read.
ReplyDeleteHi,I am Tahlia from Awahono School and I really like your post you sent because it has where you would like to go and why. But next time you could change the colour of your writing on your last slide because I couldn't read it. From Tahlia
ReplyDeleteOK lots of people said they cant read it And a question Tahlia. What colour should a change it too?
DeleteHi, I am Sophie from Awahono School. I like how you made the Canadian flag be the background on the second slide. If you went to Canada it would take a long time to walk through one of the biggest malls in the world. What does the d in 600d mean? Although your post is awesome you might want to think about a different background for the slides. From Sophie
ReplyDeleteSophie if you were in NZ it would mean 600 dollars same as everybody else green to green i am going to change it
DeleteHi Thomas, Jake here from Awahono School. I like your post about where you would go if you had the chance. Canada is much more interesting than I thought! Have you ever thought about maybe highlighting your writing on your last slide because it is really hard to read? Other than that it is really good!
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-Jake
OK lots of people said they cant read it And a question Jake. What colour should a change it too?
DeleteHi, I'm Violet from Awahono School. I like your DLO about Canada and why you would go there if you could go wherever you wanted. I also like all the backgrounds. On the last slide I think you should change your background or the colour of your writing because it's hard to read. Keep up the good work! from Violet
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Thomas, My name is Anuk and I'm a student at Waikowhai Primary School. Wow, Canada looks like an awesome place to live! (I've heard they have yum pancakes..) It looks like you have planned a lot to make your holiday the best! This reminds me of when some people at my school did the 'Summer Learning Journey' and did blog posts about where they'd like to go for a holiday. Maybe next time you could mention what sort of things you'd like to buy at the mall in Toronto, that would be cool.
ReplyDeleteI'm excited to read more of your blog posts, They are very good!
Kind Regards,
Anuk
I probably native stuff like new clothes,food and new free time stuff
DeleteHi there! My name's Oscar from Manukau, Te Waka Ako, Waikowhai Primary School. You have made an interesting blogpost about where you would want to go on holiday. It reminds me of when I had to make a slideshow about what we would do if we traveled New Zealand. Have you considered changing the colour of the text or your background on your slideshow? If you would like to see my learning my blog address is http://wpsoscarc.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Thomas, it's me, Lachlan from Awahono School. I like your DLO about Where you would go if you could go anywhere you want. I think you should change the colour of the writing because it is a bit bright. Here is the link to my blog https://awahonolachlanm.blogspot.com/
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Lachlan
Hey Lachlan nice feed foward but what slide is is it 1,2,3,4,5 or 6 hope you come back
DeleteHi, I'm Rawiri from Awahono School. I like your DLO about Canada and why you would like to go there if you could go anywhere you want in the world. I think you could have made the writing a different colour on the last page because I couldn't really see it with the money background.
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