Monday, August 12, 2019

Free writing



Once upon a time there were 2 girls homeless living on a road there parent didn't like them so they kick them out when there 5 and 8 so they had asked for money they only really get dollar a day so they wouldn't save 5 days to get a combo for macs but only drink water but one day they were 10 and 13 say can you make a dollar to lots money they started at going to the $1 store and saw 1 for 30 mints and said lets buy it and sell it for 50 cents they sold 30 and made $15 dollar and the little said lets buy something to eat said the younger girl and the older girl said because we could make more money from this went to dollar store so they think buying a clothes,jeweller and others so he went a restaurant and renting cost 20 dollar per day and just buy it cost $500 dollar so then I will come back and the girls were starting hungry so they went the cheapest shop and got bread for 3 dollar for 7 ciabatta and they bought it and share 2 each so they left with 3 and that didn't really fill there body so they ate last 3 that split half half so they get 1.5 bread so they were 70% full so they had 12 went at the super market they bought fruit burst lollies for 3 bucks and they got like 24 lollies so they sold  or 24 but in 2 hours in the street so 24 x 5 = 12.00 9 + 13= 21  so they can buy 20 dollar of food like Nandos butterfly chicken for 10 for a few piece so they what bought now but they did a big mistake cause now 1 dollar so they said we get minimum wage 600 dollar with no place to live so the ran off with out butterfly chicken .

1 comment:

  1. Hi there Thomas It´s your well known friend Koda. I like the story you wrote about 2 homeless girls, it reminded me of the story I wrote about the little girl and the red balloon. Go and check it out when you have time. I love that you include maths I always am in a good mood for maths. Maybe next time you publish your blog post, read it to make sure it makes sense. That is all I wanted to say for and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story. If your wanting to check ou my blog my blog address is here:
    http://kpskodan.blogspot.com

    Kind Regards
    Koda

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