For the past few week we are doing bee writing because we want a beehive in the end of term so we are writing about it so these is my publish writing I hope u enjoy this cool bees called THE ENDANGERED
Why hello there Thomas, It's your friend Koda commenting on your blog. I like your writing allthough you have not told your audience what type of writing you are doing. It looks like you have put alot of effort into this piece of writing. Maybe next time increase the size of your writing so people can read it easier and if it goes out of your drawing increase the size of your drawing. I've said what I wanted to say and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of your blog posts and if you want to check out my blog and comment on it my blog addresss is here: http://kpskodan.blogspot.com
Why hello there Thomas, It's your friend Koda commenting on your blog. I like your writing allthough you have not told your audience what type of writing you are doing. It looks like you have put alot of effort into this piece of writing. Maybe next time increase the size of your writing so people can read it easier and if it goes out of your drawing increase the size of your drawing. I've said what I wanted to say and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of your blog posts and if you want to check out my blog and comment on it my blog addresss is here:
ReplyDeletehttp://kpskodan.blogspot.com
Kind Regards
Koda