This week I want to do a pobble365 hope you enjoy
Once upon a time there was an octopus that live under a town that no one knew about until now,a person saw lots of tentacles so they assume it was an octopus and the octopus think so he stared to get mad and destroy the city and raft,boat and ship our to try to stop but many people die who try to stop it few year later lots of water is gone and the octopus are going to die and after a few year he is finally dead and they build a new city and island and it lived happily ever after.
What a freaky picture! I would be terrified of an octopus that is that large!! You have sequenced your story well, but maybe you could try to add a bit more detail to your story. Add some adjectives to describe a bit more.
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